Thursday, 18 August 2011

Descriptive Writing - My Room

In our class we have been learning how to describe places.  The writing below is a description of Brodie's room.  I wonder if he lives in the country?  Do you think his room is tidy?  Tell us what you think.



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4 comments:

  1. Mrs Hulbert18 August 2011 at 14:40

    Well done Brodie! You have written a great description of your room. I am glad that I don't have to nag you about cleaning it! :)

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  2. Mrs Hulbert18 August 2011 at 16:17

    How about you bring in a photo of your room, Brodie.

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  3. brodie's grandma18 August 2011 at 18:22

    dreams are great, well done

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  4. Karah Bixley19 September 2011 at 12:12

    I could picture everything in my mid great job

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